That was astounding Saane, I am really persuaded by your speech I really enjoyed how you had kept looking up, projected your voice and had humor. My feedback is maybe next time you should try to have your speech a little longer. However, it was an outstanding speech I am also quite inspired to see how you standard is. Tomorrow is going to be quite challenging for the year 5s anyway, I also quite enjoyed how you used your originality and you didn't get ideas based of the internet. Kai Pai!
Well the truth is you were fascinating and today, I had hear some astounding speeches. Again I would like to say Saane you were brilliant but so was everyone else. I can't wait for the results for the finalists for room 15. Good luck everyone!
That was astounding Saane,
ReplyDeleteI am really persuaded by your speech I really enjoyed how you had kept looking up, projected your voice and had humor. My feedback is maybe next time you should try to have your speech a little longer. However, it was an outstanding speech I am also quite inspired to see how you standard is. Tomorrow is going to be quite challenging for the year 5s anyway, I also quite enjoyed how you used your originality and you didn't get ideas based of the internet. Kai Pai!
thank you maneet good luck on your speech tomorrow and hope you do well
DeleteWell the truth is you were fascinating and today, I had hear some astounding speeches. Again I would like to say Saane you were brilliant but so was everyone else. I can't wait for the results for the finalists for room 15. Good luck everyone!
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ReplyDeleteWell done Saane A great speech!
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